Three Poems
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Goals for tonight:
fly from rocky cliffs
swim with otters
simplify the tax code
engage in a trite oneuppance
with a drunk cummings
sleep it off
and dream
To do:
plumb the more modern lines
do something Zen
use Zen as an adverb
catch my neighbor's eye
as he does laundry
hang mine in surrender
hear it flap in the breeze. It's so nice
to be under something else's power
and let it be like sailing,
which I've never done
and dream
does it rock so –
or so?
Sew a blanket with sleeves
make a million bucks
shear a sheep – shear anything!
And sell the wool for a trout.
Make breakfast.
Done.
Fenced
Spent virgin candles
stuffed in the Corona box
the truck didn't take away
and with jars of honey
in my bathroom,
what would people make
of my relics
even less well-placed?
The neighbors,
they mean well,
and I've learned to say
turn the fucking music down
in Spanish
and there's some respect
that comes with that
but if they only knew
what happens in these rooms.
The Skill in Gravity
Vantage is a type of wood,
a sound knock of understanding,
that reverberation across
a snowy vista,
children sledding until
they meet with something solid
the ones that have seen
the other seasons,
let them set up the track
unless they've got
a score to settle.
Let the plow pile
up the snow
for a bank like a pool game
and there's the skill in gravity
that grating, the grind
under a plastic sled
until you meet the other side
the unwind
and sleep later.
Ah, winter.
Sara Fitzpatrick Comito edits the online journal Orion headless. Her poetry has appeared in places such as The Smoking Poet, Leveler and Barrier Islands Review. She's married to a carpenter and stone mason who, for simplicity's sake, are the same person.
Surprising endings. Nice line breaks and music throughout. I love how the breaks and lines build tension naturally and convey the stories effortlessly. Very nice work!
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Wish I had seen your comment earlier, Paul. Thank you for reading! Your feedback made my day.
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